I remember...
The moment I first saw you
When I first looked into your eyes
I felt a tremor,pass down my spine
But you remained unaffected.
I remember...
The other times
Fate put us together.
The many efforts I made
To reach out to you
But you remained indifferent.
I remember...
How desperate I felt
When I did not feel
your presence near,
When I tried to let you know
how much I yearned for you.
But you never seemed to care.
I remember...
The day you were leaving
And I saw you passing by..
My eyes brimming with
unshed tears,
Wondering if you would take me along.
But you never noticed.
I remember...
The tumult I felt within me
Waiting to reveal my
feeling to you,
wanting to probe into
Your silence
And then...
I felt your
eyelids rise..
The time stood still
when you stopped
and nodded.
And
I understood you cared.
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32 comments:
this poem was penned by my mom when she was 18 years old.(year-1985).
n yes,i just typed it..it was originally written in English..
This poem is really marvellous.You have brilliantly represented your mom's work.Thanks.keep on writing such poems..I appreciate ur work on this field
@the bird's nest,
thanx 4 d appreciation..
Lovely Lovely... Love waits but true love never leaves you.
Beautiful... Simply beautiful. Period.
Thanks for dropping by Anwesa; much appreciated.
@priya,
thanx 4 reading,wat a lovely feedback...love never leaves.ur a writer's delight.
@kartz,
thanx 4 d appreciation..
wow...say hi to your mom.
She wrote it so well..a gem it is.
rolling you :D
@vicky,
thanx..i'll say it 2 her..
well..its amazing post...liked it a lot
@prajyot,
thanx..
To didi,
God I see where are your gene's from now !! Lovely poem. Hmm.. If Love were a big swimming pool - I would love to fall again, and again, and yet again ...
To Aunty,
smiles and regards.
@abhishek sim,
hey,liked ur comparison..
dis s awesome...b'fully written...lovely!!!
@pooja,
thanx..njoy d puja!!
awesome u r mother has done a gr8 job ..i should learn a lot now :)..
urs..hemu..
@hemanth potluri,
thanx..all d best!
wow ur mum is as brilliant as u r!
Keshi.
@keshi,
hmmm..thanx..
so sweetly put down...:)...thanx 2 ur mom 4 presenting such a lovely poem...
@nitijita,
thanx dear!!
How wonderful!My heartfelt applause to her :)
@sameera,
thanx dear!
great dedication from a proud daughter..beautiful poem..thanks for sharing it. :)
i once happened to visit this blog...but didnt know that it was your blog....and the colors are the best combo...i love them...!!!
and the lines.....lovely..!!!
ovation to your mom frm this little blogger..!!
@yamini,
thanx dear!!!!
Love the last line.. changes the entire tone of the poem.. Lovely.. Your mom is really good...
Write poetry
@workhard,
thanx a lot...
The tumult I felt within me while reading this is inexplicable.
This one's my favourite.
@kaunquest,
Thanks !!
@Tulika,
Thanks !
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